5.1.406: FILING PROCEDURES; APPEAL; REVIEW AND COMMENT; REVISIONS; FILING WITH CITY CLERK:
A. The original draft of a proposed initiative shall be submitted by a Petition Committee to the City Clerk without title.
B. The Petition Committee shall write the original draft of every initiative in plain, nontechnical language and in a clear and coherent manner.
C. The City Clerk shall immediately submit the original draft to the Initiative Review Committee for review and comment. No later than ten (10) business days after the date of submission to the City Clerk, unless withdrawn by the Petition Committee, the Initiative Review Committee shall render its comments to the Petition Committee concerning the format and/or substance of the draft at a meeting open to the public. The Initiative Review Committee may request assistance from any City department in reviewing and preparing comments on the submitted draft.
D. To the extent possible, drafts shall be worded with simplicity and clarity so that the effect of the measure will not be misleading or likely to cause confusion among voters. The draft shall not present the issue to be decided in such manner that a vote for the measure would be a vote against the proposal or viewpoint that the voter believes that he or she is casting a vote for or, conversely, that a vote against the measure would be a vote for a proposition or viewpoint that the voter is against. Comments from the Initiative Review Committee shall contain a summary of the proposed initiative followed by a series of questions concerning the wording, intent and purpose of the proposal and any necessary editorial changes to promote compliance with the plain language provisions of this section. These comments shall be provided to the Petition Committee no later than two (2) business days before the meeting and will be reviewed verbally during the meeting.
E. Following the public meeting, but before submission to the City Clerk, the Petition Committee may revise the draft to incorporate some or all of the comments of the Initiative Review Committee. Revisions in direct response to the comments of the Initiative Review Committee must be submitted by the Petition Committee to the Initiative Review Committee within two (2) business days for review and comment. An additional public meeting shall be scheduled no later than five (5) business days following receipt of the revised draft. If the Initiative Review Committee has no additional comments concerning the revised draft, it may so notify the Petition Committee in writing, and, in such case, a hearing on the revised draft pursuant to this subsection is not required. If any substantial revision is made to the draft, other than revisions in direct response to the comments of the Initiative Review Committee, the revised draft shall be resubmitted to the Initiative Review Committee in accordance with subsection C of this section.
F. After the meeting provided in subsection C of this section, a copy of the original typewritten draft which was submitted to the Initiative Review Committee, a copy of any revised drafts with changes indicated, if applicable, and the final language, if applicable, for the proposed initiative shall be submitted to the City Clerk without a petition title, submission clause or ballot title.
G. If the Initiative Review Committee and the Petition Committee are unable to reach consensus on specific language for the submitted initiative draft, the Initiative Review Committee shall submit its written comments as to the proceedings to the City Clerk for referral to the Title Board. (Ord. 86-24; Ord. 00-175; Ord. 01-42; Ord. 02-212; Ord. 07-210; Ord. 16-102)